ill: ya verse is hot but the structure do need work. lines nice tho. im feelin the bar bout recycled originality. and you reused alot of the same words, so you shud work a lil vocab... but aigh shit

covert: i really aint feelin the first two bars and the last two bars, everything else is hot and on topic. yall two styles is different so yall got at the topic good.

overall is an aigh drop. keep upin ya shit. holla front