ILL- You showed some sign of begining skill. You had the right idea your punches were just weak an that mike jackson shits played to death on this kid. An some shit just wasent maken alot of sense to me. Be more clever in your shit.

Mike- Desent drop you feeded on his shit but no rule against it so I like the first line
Your punches could also use some work. Be more creative you got the right idea it just comes with practice.

OVERALL-Mike for harder punches
Hit these battles up with votes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106542
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106449
thanks