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Old 01-16-04, 03:30 PM   #21
TheUnderRated
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don't know what kind of herb the herbs here is smokin for real easily takes this in my opinion .....krakka you had like 0 vocab about the most basic ryhme scheme i'm ever seen you put the toothfairy in a rap....its doable but not the way you done it...
your structure is really fucked you had short lines...long lines....coke lines....i dunno my vote goes to for real for one creative line the one about the inner vet ....the rest was garbage and i'm sadi i read it peace....vote fo real
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