this was tough...
honestly i read both at least two times all the way through

born..
came pretty decent...couple of stand out punches in my opinion...
i didnt like your first few bars but you picked up for the rest of your verse...
flow was there...structure was nice...and a few nice punches...
overall you scored well..and ended consistent...

fav lines...
He'll be staying primative, draggin knuckles and such...
It's true we sprang from apes, but D didn't spring far enough.

made me laugh^ good one b2k


diverse...
i didnt like your opener...
the age punches are just played...i know it sucks cus its an easy entry for some
personals...but they are just played either way you look at them...
but you also picked it up as your verse developed...
flow was there...structure was good..and the punches got better toward the end

my fav line...
BTKs attitude's grown full blown and suddenly he's arrogant
yes words could be thrown but i'll save ya the embarrassment

nice...have seen this concept..very creative..

overall
b2k gets my vote for originality..and not having played concepts..
diverse your shit was tight..the age lines hurt u a little..
but all in all i still like your verse

v/B2K

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