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Old 01-16-04, 03:56 PM   #14
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ill break this down line for line
Reign mans verse

No Matter How Hard This Kids Tryin My Spit's Flyin At Alias
Finds The Bitch And Hits Quick Gives Him Fits Writhin In A Ditch Dyin
nice wordplay here

Master Plan To Collapse Ya Glands With Cannons When I Blast Ya Man
So Ya Crashland Like A Legless Rapper That Cant Stand Up To The Task At Hand
nice wordplay and multies

Pride In Your Bitches Eyes When She Realize What's Between My Thighs
Fantasized bout My Surprise Since Your Little Guy's Just Minimized
At Least You're Tryin But Cease Your Cryin Please Its A Beast You're Fightin
Reachin Rite Inside My Levis Jeans Dyin To Beat The Lion
again nice use of multies.. the disses didnt hit that hard though

Explosive Lungs Corrosive Tongue Consider This Post Closed Youre Done
My Flows Just One Just Another Victim Reign*Mans Roasted Son
overall this verse was filled with alot of good wordplay.. and pretty decent disses i give this verse a 7.5/10


aliases verse
this kid, he be in the 'text book' of 'free agents'*
but it ok kid, the shit aint nothing major....
Xtreme Lyrical Gangsters have you played,**
and my opening 3 lines, just had you slayed,
the wordplay in these rhmyes was pretty basic nothing major.. and the disses were pretty basic nothing mindblowing here

i seen ur raps, an we should have pinkslips on,
an that aint no dress, flip word, an leave you spun,
if i tried in this battle, it would be a waste of lines,
force feed you my watch, give you a rough time,
with a record like urs i'd go away and die,
your a disgrace of molecules, a waste of life!!!
overall this verse was pretty basic there was nothing real special bout the rhymers plus the disses were pretty simple and plain

overall vote: im voting for reign man in this battle.. he had better wordplay.. better uses of mulites.. and more clever lines than alias had.. vote reign man
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