Yo wen dis nigga watches da commercial for herbal essence he gets a sensation...to take off his clothes,dream about herbs and start the process of masterbation...
Imma treat this niggas mom like i treat the rest of my hoes...but once i get her on da bed, my son anything goes...
pretty basic disses talkin bout someones mom.. etc.. however shit was aiight.. flow on this was pretty good too
I take off my pants and stick my lil friend in her asscrack...get her to moan den tell her to jump off my nut sack...
I get dis niggas whole family hype and worked...
tell dem to sit in front of the comp and watch their bitch get merked...
lol again pretty basic disses.. but you can sense aggression with these lines
U wanna join the elites of r/b, but u cant u a disgrace...if i ever seen u on my streets ill tell u to get the fukk out mah face...
the second part of this bout tell you to get out of my face was weak
You a fuckin hill billy dat look whiter than my cumstain..the way i merk u ppl gonna think imma a magician and ask r u david blain???
I cant control it,its like I've been injected...if dis nigga wins, it'll be worse then Bush gettin re-elected...
overall this verse was pretty good you came at him really hard.. disses were on point... and the verse flowed pretty well.. ill give you a 8/10 for this verse
This bitch is a rappa imitation, really just a figment of my imagination
which means, the signifigance of ur existance is nothing more than my fascination w/ assasination
hahaha hey good wordplay on here
Its time for surgery when i disect this sick shit, leave u cryin like ya in a baby carriage
this bitches chance of winning lasted about as long as "Britney Spears's marriage"
good creative punchline here
looks like the Grinch did more than steal christmas this year if u want the truth
the word in the street is he stole all his lines, ya he played it by ear, go ahead ask Dr. Seuss
nice personal diss
Ur punches are jokes they come up short of "Cumming hard"
Grinch about to choke like Jenna Jameson with a "Shot in the dark" (Cumshot lol)
lol. nice again.. i good punchline
C Lo the only kid with flow, i know u be suckin down "seamen" like Mo B. Dick did
u know he gonna swallow cause he can't spit for shit
hes addicted to takin it like a champ all up in his behind
i just ripped this faggot cocksucka like a food stamp while he waitin in the unemployment line!
overall: this verse was pretty good.. you had some nice creative punchlines thrown in here.. the verse flowed pretty well too
overall vote
punchlines- c lo
disses- grinch
impact of disses- grinch
multies- neither
wordplay- c lo
creativity in disses- clo
consistensy of verse- clo
vote: clo, grinch had some solid disses no bout.. however c lo had the type of punchlines that win you battles.. his shit was clever and to the point
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