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Old 01-16-04, 04:34 PM   #29
prophacyz
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yo took this shit soo fuckin easy...granted some of his punches were played...but he managed to flip them and make em sound tight...he had good flow...nice structure...easy to read...although all those caps....not exactly necessary but if thats how u emphasize ur punches aight then....

gazeebo,...honestly dog...i'm disappointed...ur lines were stretched and ur punches were pretty weak...i've seen better from you...try some original punches or if u gon' use played ones try to flip em up a lil bit...see verse...

so with that bein said i'm givin my vote to
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