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IP:
This Was An Ok Piece. Flow Was Ok, Kinda Fell Off In Places But Came Back Together Nicely. Vocab Was Too Simplistic, Would Have Had A Better Effect If You Had Worded Some Lines Better Aswell. But That Will Come Over Time.
Keep Dropping Them Un.
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