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Old 01-16-04, 07:21 PM   #17
SaM sKILLeT
Flyweight
 
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IP:

Rhythmic Hints took this battle. he had better punches, structure, flow, rhymes, all that. Only thing, your verse was off with this line:

A dimwit who wouldn’t “cum to grips” with his hand on his dyck/

It didn't really rhyme with the lines around it, but other than that your verse was good.

Illmatic, you just didn't come with any good punches at all. Work on that.



Could you guys check out this battle? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106881 Thanks