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Old 01-16-04, 07:40 PM   #5
Straight Ace
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Insisted on blind spits,coverd up for personals..hide what u lack..
..But its certain ill break the tie....Like when its around your neck..
Bars carefully balanced..& selected..to fit this merk of the week..
..Underrated i heared you bit wack lyrics? u are what you eat..
Shud be elevated or elite i school this kid & waste these herbs..
Dispatchin' ur dictionairy is the only way u got 'a way' wit words..
I'm battlin a no one & no one is perfect...so i guess thats a lie..
& those 5 uppings..wont make ur verse better..regardless the try..
..Im fiend,like a demon hauntin your soul..constantly on ur mind..
...Kids all talk & no action like............ adult movies for the blind..
Overall lookin' i included 2 filler lines, those bein flaws,you see ?
But you should worry..in contradiction..
...................to that last replied piece..6 forums down in poetry..

two lines where switched in my original reply