the way i see it iceman takes this because fo-real had really elementary ryhmes like i mean you attempted some metas but they fell flat you gotta get more creative just like think about shit and then recite it to yourself then be like if i read that would i think it was dope....and if you do that already then figure out what dope is......
iceman you need to work on vocab too your drops are like hella multied and you just ryhem random words it seems... i onno either way vote iceman....