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Old 01-16-04, 08:18 PM   #12
Slik Shadow
Flyweight
 
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expert in a field and on a track yet you lost the long distance race...
look at his avy bitch is too embarrased to even show his whole face....
Not really feeling it...just ok
eyein me accepted my callout we can get it on son just listen...
you r gonna get fucked in this battle but i'll let u pick the preposition...
Not a great punch
no matter how hard you try to leave me slutted you'll never concieve..
get a deck o cards tatted on your forearm still no ace up your sleeve...
Good punch wit word play
prolly won 9 cause you dazzle herbs eyes with multis in every line..
you wanna spitshine your rhyme so u open your mind and kick like 6 sometime..
Blah...personals off wins are played these days
that ain't my style call me holyfield i'm bout punchin in the title bout..
play off played concepts and scripts and prepare to get knocked out..
Decent
straight Ace as if the sexuallity is some sort of a question mark an unknown...
your runnin out of paper so hit up my rhyme bank if u ever need a loan...
Decent closer


Ace

Insisted on blind spits,coverd up for personals..hide what u lack..
..But its certain ill break the tie....Like when its around your neck..
Decent
Bars carefully balanced..& selected..to fit this merk of the week..
..Underrated i heared you bit wack lyrics? u are what you eat..
lol...good punch, nice the way u flipped it
Shud be elevated or elite i school this kid & waste these herbs..
Dispatchin' ur dictionairy is the only way u got 'a way' wit words..
Not bad
I'm battlin a no one & no one is perfect...so i guess thats a lie..
& those 5 uppings..wont make ur verse better..regardless the try..
lol....nice concept
..Im fiend,like a demon hauntin your soul..constantly on ur mind..
...Kids all talk & no action like............ adult movies for the blind..
Ha....another nice punch
Overall lookin' i included 2 filler lines, those bein flaws,you see ?
But you should worry..in contradiction..
...................to that last replied piece..6 forums down in poetry..
Good ending

Overall - Straight Ace Took This Wit His Harder, More Witty Punches

Im'a try to get 100 posts on this alias tonight, if i dont ill come back and vote wit my other name