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Old 01-16-04, 08:21 PM   #14
Straight Ace
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CarsonJet
Not up to your usual standards..
Some weird 'rhymin points'..& not the usual creativity.
..Still with like..80% of your full capacity..
You managed to squeeze out some witty lines..
Ok punches..could've been better overall..
I guess you little underestimated your opponent?

Madness
..regardless the reply box, ur structure is still fucked..
w/e.. you had nice lines, problem is..they arent punches..
You hardly even actually insulted him..or threw a punch,
directly towards him..it cudve been vs anyone..
So work on that , personals & overall more complexity.
..Not bad though..

still..

vote CarsonJet