ummm.. this was funny.. but one of the worst pieces i ever read..
..."Yo Girl How You Doin" - She Was Like - "I'm Doin Fine
Theres a Party 'Round The Block - Yo You Wanna Unwind?"
...My Dick Was Like "Yeh" - But My Head Was Like "Wait"
dont talk during a piece.. =\ hah
but ya..
*speechless*
well your structure was good, your wording and flow was good.. your just concept was bad.. i dont want to hear about u running through campus naked with a condom on throwing up then beating it

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