Yeah i agree this was a pretty good piece here.....it was really long lol....but it made a good read i thought....structure was alright in this, just watch the line length in some of the parts....you both had good parts i thought.

Gene: your verses were pretty good, enjoyed them,...you had some nice vocab and some nice flow through out both of your verses...your structure is improving since your other open mics, keep that up.

Yaz: your verse were pretty good as well,...had some alright vocab in them....the flow was there, its stayed on pretty well....had some good storylines in there like gene...structure was alright, could be touched up.

But overall this was a nice collab...long but it made a good read...keep at it.