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He's got realialty detained.. living fairy tales.. just straight fiction
Seriously..
Kid you're tha wackest head on RB since that faggot named Brixton
Told B.I. to drop his verse.. Exept his shit slipped and fell to tha rug
Thats funny.. I didn't know there was any thugs who lived in Belzabub
Related to Irish?
Cuz I ain't talking deaths of leprachauns.. when I say I killed his luck
Needed a refill on talent..so he came to me..but rejected his Phil Me Up
Now I'm telling you
....ya haven't listened to shit..till ya heard what he's content with in life
He even volunteers to help out tha peasantry.. And B.I's still not nice
Couldn't come thick.. with punches that stick.. If He spit a cup of syrup
After all..what kinda of flow do you expect from a homo who lives in Europe
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9/10 nice verse but structure was off or it would of been a 10/10
aight overall nice punches and personals,aight werdplay cuz structure was off
which effected rymescene a little,pretty decent opener and closer
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Walking Through Bars?? Admitting Pre-Adolescent Punks into Drink Now?
that's gotta be the only for ya to Stroll in a Bar..& not get Knocked Out
tell me How!!..you can be Theoretical...& still be stuck in Fuked up Kaos
you got so many Victories..& you still fail to Produce a Respectable Loss
to a Counterpart of Quality..Fag is so Poor he's Rejected from the Street
you're ass could be fucking Dr.Dre..yet you still wouldnt be able to Beat
Kaos Battles Represent Sleep..20 hits of Valium couldn't give them Life
see the only Sharpness you'll be Wielding is a Defenceless Butter Knife
wot Are you Like?? from First View you a Fake-Faker uppin his Record
"For all the Herb Murders I commited"..*Kaos*..I Confess & Regret-Lord
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this was nice,easy to read,flowing werdplay good structure
good punches and personals,opener and closer were creative
overall 10/10,cuz it was a well approached battle verse
vote/B.I. Detained
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