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Old 01-16-04, 11:18 PM   #15
SaM sKILLeT
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Nothing wise about your wayz -thats a fact
Battling wack newbies to get 5-0 - doesnt get you respect

.... Not gettin the rhyme, no punch
You think you hot, but you hasitated to go first
You could have just said said "no" - instead of a wild outburst

eh... not feelin this... could reword this better, instead of just stating it
Dont have the wisdom to beat me, stick to herbs
your as scared of me, as the Croatians were of Serbs
Your fake - like claiming you had sex before you been laid
Thinking your shit is ill, but its all cure-able with first aid

1st bar... it's great that you're droppin history, but IT AIN'T A CONNECTIN PUNCH... 2nd bar, iight, but played
they say getting hit by lightning is less of a chanse then wining lotto
This verse just struck you like lightning- look at your avatar photo

eh... nice try for a personal on his avy...


OK wise's verse

Making trees fall on this kid.. is tha only way he'd dialogue
13-8.. shit kid.. My punches will make your record look odd

eh, iight
Here.. I'll give you a lisence.. so you're offically my whore
Koed Eki last time.. but now.. he's even wacker than before
What an original name.. did you think of that one by yourself
If skills was money.. On one hand he could count his wealth

eh... not very hard hitting..
Fuck online.. when this through.. It'll say Eki's status deceased
You'd have a big funeral.. for all of tha dickriders you pleased

hm... iight
You're a mentor.. Not even tha wackest on RB take his advice
Bitch slapped Eki backwards.. so now this herb's name is Ike

heh... last line was good wordplay

Okay, Eki came pretty wack... Wise came iight and it was enough to win.

Vote: Wise Ways

I'd appreciate it if you could return the favor here: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106881
U don't have to break mine down like I did yours, cuz mine's longer, but if ya could drop some feedback and a vote i'd appreciate it