I was actually imagining a safe way, specificly. But I dunno... I got actually a not so good ending. I imagined that person coming through the door as being a huge shadowy demonic figure. I it was that line about there being no brighter day. Kinda gave it a sense of hopelessness where she sort of has to give in to whatever the guy wants.

'Guess I'm riding a negative veiwpoint wavelength or something.

I found the structure interesting. I've read a lot of four lined verse poems, those are always good in their conventiality. And I've read three lined verse poems, those actually always annoy me. But this had five lines for every paragraph, and I realized it as soon as I read it. In my head I was imagining the last line of each part being whispered. Kind of gives it special importance. I dunno, but I definitly liked it. The whole thing.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.