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Old 01-17-04, 10:13 AM   #10
Straight Ace
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Outcome came with more complexity..
Hence vocabulairy & overall writing skill.
Still doesnt make a verse good though, Both elevate.
Work on punches & creativity..apply wit & comedy..
Krakka was far to simplistic..Hardly enjoyable,
To be quite honest.. & work on your structure..
Its all over the place, but overall Outcome takes it,
With a overall better battles verse (& punches..)

vote Outcome