Easy match to judge, newer people should learn how much a clean structure helps the flow and message of your verse. For this reason and also because of personals, better punches, and an overall better verse my vote goes to AJ. My only advice would be to come harder at certain points, like when you started talking about 'the void' it was a little poetry-ish. However, liked the punch that came after that set-up. Nice job guys, drop a vote if you have the time

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