This piece should have gotten more replies lazy people..
anyways..

"Deep inside are secrets that to man i confide..
tried to hide from the pain to much rain creates a tide..."

Great opener..The first drop was very deep and well written It showed good emotions..
but some lines were simplistic over all the first drop was pretty good...TheUndeRated good job..

The second part...DaiLLestRebel

"Feelings are oozin, thoughts are confusin, certain spots have been bruised...
A lost detective with no clues, afraid to loose, body's been verbally abused..."

Nice flow a little simplistic but very nice expressive flow..

Over all it was pretty well written always kept the flow..Howver the structure could have been better...

Both emcee's did great keep it up IJL..