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Old 01-17-04, 11:36 AM   #21
Gene Pool
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some deep shit man. u stayed on point and your flow was tight very well structured rhyme scheme here as well, some decent wordplay and good use of vocab and some nice multi's made this piece stand out even more and your closing line was a nice way to finish it off. good job man keep droppin. peace.
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