Banned: Spamming
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IP:
Dazasta
this kid called me out for posts so he can finally vote/
still his lines could get any hotter if i lit a fire in his throat/
Its a text battle..
nope...the only dope you kno is to get feens/
while you dreamt of beating ace in cyphers during wet dreams/
Obivously one would think of all ppl i would like it..
..Its an ok punch regardless who it concerns..
it seems like the odds are piling against you rapidly/
you'll get ahead in life...right in back of me/
Ok, little wordplay.. ok punch
your that easy..i've been to jails and seen better bars/
you'll always be a step ahead...right in front of cars/
Basically kind of the same concept..as one bar back..
..Though better executed & more of a punch, ok..
you run with sars...my punches leave you sick and weary/
i went first to give you time to study the..dictionary/
..It's been done but ok..
im strictly scary...i had to get you votes to wreck 'um/
your moms affection shown by sticking weapons up ur rectum
Weak closer..
Assasin
This mutha fuckin' emcee has filled me with laughter//
The bitch can't even spell his own name 'Dazasta'//
..Alright.. ok punch..
That explains how much of a vocab you got ferreal//
Go out to diner before I post, and eat ya last meal//
Now ur contradicting yourself..
In the second line you clown him for not bein able to write..
..If i am correct..its spelled "for real" not "ferreal"..
So that's wack.
When I look at this bitch I must start to be starvin' to death//
Cuz I'ma eat this emcee real fast, Dazasta take ya last breath//
..Played, but one of your better lines.
I'ma murder this rapper, and he won't even know he dead//
This kid will be left in 'wonder' like his last name was 'bread'//
Ok wordplay..but just cause you put 2 words tween ' s..
Dont mean you take the wordplay catagory..but ok punch
I'm the one causin' lyracal 'dazasta', faster, then the master, of all of rap//
Can't this bitch emcee, see me, and breath deep, I beat em for a fact//((Damn))
..No real punch..& that damn comment after your lines is wack to..
I'm out this battle dawg, I barely even tryed, I'm sorry//
Even though your murked you still can come to the afterparty//
..No punch..filler lines, bad closer.
Both came weak in my eyes..neither really came with hard punches..
Or comedy..very mediocre & un-creative..both had slightly played lines..
But Dazasta came with better punches & most important more personal punches..
Which give him the upper hand in this battle..
Both where even when it comes to structure & flow..
..Assasin had a little wordplay..so yeah he would have taken that catagory..
But nothing great..
Dazasta wins basically cause of better punches & personals.
vote Dazasta
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