Oh geezz

Fam listen take the word mother#####*& out your vocabulary ..
your flow was on point..
Vocab sucked...elevate on vocab and structure..
you do have potential I can see.

you just have to strive hard for it...
and do a better topic instead of guns and shooting.. I am from the projects and im tired of emcees talking about guns and killing just stop damn...

other then that it was simplistic..however you have potential..

Be Easy..