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What My Blade Of Rage Does..

As the sword leaves it's origin of a shield.. the Chemist violent ways is Revealed.

Sling!!.. The death sentence you face from a mysterious Blade
Seeing your own reflection as your humanity takes another Stage.
Gore massacre and sinew, My Blade cuts threw, The thrust is shrewd
leaving your facial expression open,without physical, a sight of an Omen
an individual of six senses, gets shredded with a Onimusha Ninja's weapon.
As my wrist gets aligned with my fist, with one stroke blood and flesh Drips.
As I establish, the true meaning of Violence, My perfect point causes more damage.
Victims from WarLords are left Famished, Leave it to my Blade of -Silver- to leave em vanished.
When I swing the wind takes meaning to my sword, Swwwifttt your pain and suffering is no more
scorn, warned, and torn is your complexion as wrinkles sets in.

Taking Action

Moving...Cutting intersection inside you intestines, so when victims catch erection
My blade of origin comes as a knowledgeable -Core-Ection-.
Im starting to make perplex moves with a Blade that heals wounds
and pain that smoothes and sooths your most unpeaceful thoughts.
To individuals,im the best physical -Therapist- the way physically they
label my Blade 'The Rapist' (Therapist), The Chemist uses a Blade
that involves elements of acid mixed with photics so when it hits you'll
See the -Light- with an -Explosion- erosion, from a chemical touch,
Now feel a twist when I create increments in individuals tongues.

Boom

Critique please....
and everything I script isn't pre-written all off the top...I used to do Ciphers..
Some can relate..