hey i like this one alot!!! I can relate to this one very well in some points. necromancer is right... it sounds like puberty but also in everyday life i think that theres millions of people who live through what you've put into words.
FAVORITE PART....
but now I see my errorous ways and u I shoulda trusted...//
now that im trying to remove despair
I sit down before god, he has a great stare
I see that there are people that really care
god is fair and I see the love that he shares
thank you god, for u I give this prayer....

KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!