all of those verses were really good i especially liked the way key low and mentils were flowing which made theres easy to read and understand, although theirs sounded a bit like spaced out raps rather than poetry. Deacon i liked yours alot cause it was very poetic and it seemed like you have put a lot of thought into it, and the topic was good.

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