dev won... dev you had a nice overall verse. your structure was ok and ur punches were nice. i liked your opener. you had nice flow to go along with those punches, nice verse

unknown, elevate. you need to fix your structure, shorten your lines and dont CAPS your punches, multis etc. you had bad punches with OK flow. you didnt come hard enuff in this battle to win it, so elevate.

punches- dev
creativity- dev
flow- dev
wordplay= dev
structure- dev
overall- dev

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http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106323