I liked this piece a lot ... Liked the meanin'/concept ... Dope idea ... Gotten across dopely ... Well written ... Flow was easy to follow in both verses easily ... Piece seemed well thought out ...

over clouds we must soar, where inflamed brains give way
to a better brighter future that will overlook today

so I keep building, till im complete
its almost obleet, but the feat, will be matched
Undefied levels will be patched.. and beat
demons & devil.. must work faster.. to achieve
happiness after.. stress will relieve..
Then we will share the laughter...

I liked those parts of the verse the best ... They stood out to me ... Nice job here to both of ya'll ... Keep em comin' ... Peace