oh, damn, this poem was beast!!! its so good, and i aint sayin that couse u replied to a shitload of mines, im sayin that becouse many reasons. ill explain. the vocab wasnt complex at all but with this poem that didnt matter becouse it doesnt seem like an extremely deep topic and it doesnt want to be as philisophical as others. the flow was alright but i liked the fact that u didnt make it rhyme the whole way thru, mostly becouse it didnt seem forced, which i liked alot. the structure, it wanst completely even bars but u also didnt stretch them out till i lost the point. now, the message, incredibly original and true. i loved the way it climaxed at the end, great, poem, just great. fuck, i dont even have to tell u to keep it up!!1

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