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Old 01-17-04, 05:14 PM   #13
NyZ GrIncH
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esco to escobar now nastradamous one is gettting stuck left in a car fo acting hard..
first take out the knife then cut out da corpse i bite with the jaws opposite of life..
new to the Rb get rid of the BS in the middle its just left NewB and you due me..
spit through you fluently in ever language where my connects to vets be who knew me..
***good opener....i like dis line get rid of the BS in the middle its just left NewB**
i see you in the next life with your text strife can't we all get along dividing herbs n vets right..
computer shooter damn dog now you rollin on a mutha fuckin scooter what you dumb..
get with a crew let em do you think you known on a internet of like a billion and 1...
put your eyes to the son cause its a waste of a retina you intrest me so i'm disectin ya..
***lol.......mad nice punches.......my son dis won u da battle****
see god gave me a gift so i'll give on to you you can have this battle i'm nice just how i do..
nastradoumous...one i'll see you later son hop on the elevator and elevate some..
cause the next battle to come you'll be left lookin oh shit my bad i guess thats this one..
**nice punch/closer at the end***

overall=9.5 out of10

first of all wheres da structure????????????
i spit like killa CaM/
u piss me off ill kill a MaN/
im glad theres no feedin cuz if there was u can juss EaT MaH ShYT/
dey call me nastradamous cuz i can predict a win when i SpiT/
**weak opener.......good line about predicting shyt***
u betta b protected cuz ill put teflon in ya chest like a mafia HiT/
u call yaself a joker ...its sad to c when u spit u playin GaMeS/
i got punchlines that make niggas cry when i call em NaMeS/
im 16 ..i bet u like 35/
got 16 wins ..prolly through shitty LiNeS/
***aight the top part killed it but u finished off strong***
i aint SeAn PaUL or JaMaiCAn but i can spit sum DuTtY RoCk/
n ya gurl stopped ryden u for me cuz I GoT a BigGa CoCk/
***lol...nice closer......best line u had***

overall=7 out of 10...work on ur structure......

good battle...nice way u was both beefin it bu tmy vote goes to the underated

vote=the underated
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