woohoo yet another well done soft focus collab, but i didnt expect anything else!

emotion: your part was a good opener to the collab and well written. your imanginary was great.the structure was simple but it worked well, and the rhyming seemed natural and flowed well.

rule: i like how you wrote some what the opposite of his, seeing the voices in a different light, as them being not so bad. your flow was great and vocab too. i liked the ending to your piece, and thought it ended the collab well.

you two did a good piece together, two thumbs up

~Tera~
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