I havnt text battled in months and I'm rusty
Please rate me from 1-10 and tell me what to work on

The three battles I've had since I started doing text again:

Battle vs Red-Eye
This win is in the bag, so just quit ya bitchin’
It was a brown eye...until you went to prison
And the next time I challenge you, just say no
Cause my lines are over ya head...like a halo
I’m not through, bitch. So Death is what u get
U’re a test dummy, I just use u to try new shit
I’m just too sick, Plus all my lines are flu-like
I’d say I’m spankin’ u, but that’s what u’d like
I’m just too nice, and son, your just garbage
This match is like a no-show...over before it started!
Battle vs Weezy Snypz
My brain contain the stuff that make flames erupt
So treat your career like a dress-shirt, & hang it up
The words that I type down, will knock u right out
Plus I keep a rifle that will leave Weezy, sniped out*
And Its hype how I come wit personals to kill you
Plus if your considered hot, I guess my lil sister’s ill too?
Be f’real dude, or I’ll blow three shells through ya head
Compared 2 your skills, I’m Raisin Bran... “too scoops ahead”!
So you a dead man, with few brains and a small heart
I'm rap god & your like a midget tripping...you fall short!
Battle vs lil jon
I come with lyrics that will leave your whole style bent
Plus the 1st word in your name describe your amount of talent
I’m just wild with lyrics when I spit these free’s, whore
& the only thing that you punch are the letter on your keyboard
I conceive more ill lines than you could ever dream of
& you ‘d still loose, even if you & the real Lil Jon teamed up
I spit supreme lines and your skills can’t rise over these
You named yourself after a rapper who just screams over beats
This shit will kill you and I will still show up at the mass
This was an easy win cause your lyrics are like my avatar...ASS!

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