Yea that's how I meant that last line to be read, not necessarily whispered but sort of attatched within the stanza but not really attatched as far as the storyline goes. I dunno why but I felt like it needed more after the four lines but something different, I forced myself to write some of this, and I thikn that showed... but the 5 line per stanza thing was my attempt at trying something different with my peices...