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Old 01-18-04, 02:29 AM   #7
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Im bout to open the book of bitch and write a new chapter
for a technician ya skillz is that of a broke rapper,
ya lyrics like porn for gays stuck on too much dick
my shit's used to eatin pussies got that cunning linguist shit,
swung and missed when I stood there and gave you a free hit,
there's no arousal in ya punches like puss wit no clit,
i battle front lines, this bitch nigga plays hopscotch on streets,
but it's nap time bitch ya sleep increases ya defeat,
now i could give ya ass a warning or beat ya punk ass wit a bat,
or hand u back ya broke ass lyrics and tell ya fix that,
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7/10 was ok nuttin speacial decent punches and personals
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I rush this fuckin newb with witty lines that tower his verse
Rhymes only run clean and smooth when I shower ur words
I try a little yes, but you beat yourself like in the middle of sex
Spit on ya quest, rip on his fasion cuz I see this kid in a dress
I think your confused, you told me that you wanted the win
The drink u refused, allowed me to make your head do a spin
My punchlines hit so hard they put the pressure on like crunchtime
Your left in dier straights and my guesture is always to jumplines
Wishin for sick with a fisherman's Stix, this a walk thru the river is thick
I deliver it quick hit ya liver wit bricks, there now I left you literlly sick
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pretty good 8/10 better battle verse good punches and personals hit harder
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vote/technician for better overall Attempt and Battle Verse
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