yo i gotta go with what they ^^^ said, if the verse was recycled it wasnt directed to tele. in that case tele gets my vote u did have some nice flow and alright punches, work on ur punch lines man, somethin hard and to the point will win u battles, u got ne Qs on shit PM me, holllaaaaa

can yall drop an honest vote off here at my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...479#post1092479

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my rhymes heatin up the track got u meltin like an icicle
this kid aint even old enuf to drive, whats he doin thuggin on his bicycle?!

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