aiight Outcome got this one for more creativity and better structure plus he had alright punches, elevate some, ull be alright...... krakka man u gotta work on ur structure its all over the place, no hate jsut helpin u out, and work on ur lines make them more complex....

vote Outcome

can yall drop an honest vote at my battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...479#post1092479

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my rhymes heatin up the track got u meltin like an icicle
this kid aint even old enuf to drive, whats he doin thuggin on his bicycle?!

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