wow. . never seen this topic been done before and i think
you handled it well. . when reading the beginning i thought
it would be about the usual loved one etc however the flip
really did do the piece justice. . I'm not sure which part
was whos but the imagery of the person's emotions used
throughout was nicely done. . I also liked the metaphors
used mid-verse, establishing what this ''deformed'' person
feels and what he is going through. . I felt that i could
actually picture the story and what was happening through
his eyes. . the last part affirmed the person's feelings and
portrays them in his own thoughts. . This piece was nice
and shouldn't be getting slept on. .

hm