hmm, im not a fan of this one at all. it had good vocab, thats not a problem. it had intelligence to it which made it alright to read. i didnt feel any emotion to it, just words...i dont know if thats just me or wat but thats how i felt or didnt. good imagery, good use of senses. thats all i got to say, just wish there was more emotion and feeling to make it more enjoyable and more relateable to the reader.

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