Presently Light...Waits
From: Hayes, VA aka Haze-where its hard ta see |
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IP:
ummmm....i guess this battle was ok for beginners, you realize your supposed be using punches and personals to diss tha other battler....lol, not talkin about your nine and bustin caps......tha breakdown:
durastik- sorry man, you cant kill him with slugs but you are actually killin me with wordplay, no hate, but elevate.....rhyme scheme: 6, wordplay: 4, punches: 3, flow: 6, total: 19/40
187- a little bit betta, atleast you used punches, still weak....keep elevatin, rhyme scheme: 6, wordplay: 6, punches: 6, flow: 6, total: 24/40
keep writin and elevate, vote- 187, peace, 1
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