Sharp Perfection.
From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin |
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IP:
thats creepy 666 posts lol
anywho the piece
short and simple. structure and vocab were simple, but it was nice that way. your imangenary was great thou, a topic of lost love done again, but you kept it interesting and real. it seemed natural and showed its emotion. it was a nice read.
~Tera~
DONT HATE
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R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~
keep singing in heaven
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