a simple poem that honestly doesnt take much skill, but its the message you get across with it that matters with pieces like this. and yours was a good topic, one that ppl should think about, one that will get ppl thinking once they read this. its a piece with a basic structure, vocab, flow, content, but it has emotion and a message and thats what made it a good read.

~Tera~
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