ok for this piece i for one liked it, simple on the outside, structure and vocab, but when you actually read it and understand whats being said then you relise the complex parts to it. ppl may not have felt emotion for the simple fact that too many just scroll throu all these poems and treat them all the same, but when they come to one that may take some effort to relise its meaning then they give up, passing up all the message and emotion. actually this piece might have drawn me in alittle more too because it reminds me of one i wrote awhile back, same structure and all. and intellegent piece.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

PS, sometimes a poem with a mystery topic are the best ones. ppl just have to try to understand harder, and if they still cant well then its their lose

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