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mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ok then
First thing's first u have to change youre style-
~These things~<May seem pretty to u but to the reader there fucking annoying to read
The way u set your peice out is also a big no no
DoNt HavE YouRe wORdS sEt OuT LikE This <It looks like an attempt to be a net Gangstur...And makes it hard to read....
Dont do a 50 cent remake it makes u look like a fool.
I am sure if u put half as much effort as u did to ur~ AND your captials and sat down and made a nice peice with a good topic u could be good.
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