iight this is how I see it...
Karmic came ok...with pretty decent rhymes at parts..but most of it was madd simple...the only line that I liked was the Dixie Chicks line..and that was only cool cuz of the set up line before it...vocabulary was fairly average, everything else was a little below average...
Kuntryboi...your shit was ok..it didn't seem like a battle verse tho, more like a lot of shit talking..like generic shit in a song when you say "I'm gonna cap you up" or some shit..u didn't have any punchlines that I could see...but your flow was nice, structure was better, vocabulary was a little better, if not equal to Karmic's....the womans defense class line was tite...nothing special tho but keep workin...
vote-Kuntryboi
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=95795
^ needs votes....thanx