Michael Madness...I see potential in your shit..for once...I see someone that had a couple of lines that made me crack a smile....you got decent rhymes, and it seems like ur grasping the concept of wordplay....you need to fix your flow tho..at some parts it was smooth but then at some parts it was just plain horrible....your structure was kinda bad too....but other than that u had a good verse overall...
Sp1tGa1m...u had decent rhymes..but no multis...no real punches either...I didn't get the thing about 2 dads that both like kittens....I thought all straight guys like kittens...lmao..vocab was weak....your flow was on point tho....nothing special about ur verse tho...needs some work but it wasn't horrible...besides the fact that you played off his verse the entire time...
vote- Michael Madness..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107780
^ battle needs some votes....I'd appreciate it if u'd return the favor...(not meaning I want u to vote for me..just saying vote on the battle lol)
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