Dope vocab here, was the first thing that stood out to me...however the bars were a little on the long side, but you had internals which made up for it with some sick flow...also your rhyming words were comlex not just 3/4 letter type shit ya know...

Dope topic, nice title too, kept me interested throught...your a dope topical writer with alot of potential dawg, keep spittin it'.... 3/5