Jae, ya commas kept throwing me off...
You shouldnt have as many, cause it make your verse hard to read...
I think kilo got this with consistantsy and more punches...

v/kilo

Please return the favor, fellas:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=107595&page=1

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