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Old 01-19-04, 10:20 AM   #1
Key-Low
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From: Hayes, VA aka Haze-where its hard ta see
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i'm not votin..........but ELEVATE, lol, this is tha truth.....so listen up,

It.......your flow was off, it sounded like you were reading off of paper, memorize your shit, tha beat didnt go well with your verse, actually throw in punches, and dont eva use a hook in a battle.....lol, .............sorry man, but you got sum work ahead of you

and prophet777.....i would say your ish was ok, but i honestly couldnt tell........your instrumental beat was too high, rememba your lyrics are more important than tha beat......tha collab idea is hilarious.....but hey, do what you gotta do,

this is just help, take it or leave it............keep spittin and ELEVATE, peace, 1
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