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Old 01-19-04, 11:31 AM   #8
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unknown skillz verse
My rhymes higly amazin and incredible..................................//
I`ll eat ur rhymes up, I sure hope they`re edible...................//
When I battle I really deliver........................................... ...//
My verses so scary that they make u start to shiver..............//
This dude is really some bedlamite......................................//
Hes too crazy to battle and too crazy to fight......................//
I can read ur lame rhymes like a Dr.Suess book....................//
Ur no match for me,I can cut u up with a reap hook..............//
This dude is really fo sho unhinged....................................//
Calm down man ur really tryin to infringe............................//
But when u look at my rhymes they make u cringe..............//
Im u tear u up,Ur verses fill up one quater of a measurin cup//
I cant even break this down into sections...
unknown had virtually no punches and this structure is whack...
you gotta stop doin...................// aight elevate man....


bonespitter verse
still dont know your 0 n 5, ya aint 5 n 0, YaYo,this unknown Skillz,
Steppin up, ya frontin these five, soon six killz, ya unshown skillzs
whack and forced punch....
whats that? you couldn't rap better, even with pac's lyrical diary
thats wack,your rhyme are like HIV,making this lyricly sick to me
ok gettin better still not very good tho
this guy is a laughing stock, no doubt in mind you ll neva be bought
worth tryin, not? see ill smoke n burn you, like all day i ll hit my pot
references to drugs dont use them... that wus whack!
ya back track, bringing war, if ya taliban ill pop ya with my left hand
keep my right fo the afgan, smile and laugh, slapped wit a back hand
lol afgan... you werent really dissin him weak punchline
this guy goes home everyday to his right gurl? (palm)-ela (hand)-erson
stop writtin,ya playin,but lossin, yo records six, and wins stay at nuthin
Ander/nothin dont rhyme... the pam refernce wus funny tho but not much of a punch...

My vote-bonespitter his punches were better... if unknown had any at all...
and no im NOT in dnasty anyway check the sig unknown....
yall returnt he favor wit honest votes on my battles in sig... Pz...
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